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Flash Write: A Balloon of Nightmares

Writer's picture: A.A.

Okay, I actually entered this short story in a contest online back in May. They picked 8 winners out of 1,100 and I GOT IN!!! I was so excited so here ya go!!! :) :) :)


The balloon is the color of midnight. 

 This fits because this balloon in particular is not a happy balloon. It is rumored to hold  all the evils and sorrows of this world.

 I don't know if that's true or not. But this is what Grand-mère has always taught me. 

 Audrick is beside me, shifting uneasily on the pavement. The growing storm rises behind us, blowing eerie winds through our small town of Copper Coast. I glance back at it, looking at the dark clouds looming like masses of black-stained cotton. 

 "Eloise," Audrick says, a note of worry in his voice. "I think we should grab the balloon and go. Let's just do what we came here for."

  I nod and do what any good best friend would do: the exact opposite. I run towards the storm and away from the balloon, fear coursing through me. I don't want any part with that balloon, no matter what Grand-mère tells me I'm destined to do. 

 I refuse to pop it. 

 Because if I pop it, and what Grand-mère has said turns out to be the truth, then I will be releasing not only other people's nightmares, but my own as well. And if I have to see Papa die before my eyes one more time...

...I don't know if I'll make it. 

 Audrick screams my name behind me. "ELOISE! ELOSIE! COME BACK, IT'S DANGEROUS!"

 I don't know how to make my feet stop. I keep running towards the storm as though I have a death wish. 

 And just as I fall to my knees, letting the wind and rain batter me like an autumn leaf, I see something through my soggy strands of wheat-colored hair.

 The balloon. It came for me after all. 

 Just like Grand-mère said it would. 

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